Sunday, 21 April 2013

Evaluation- Leah Gardiner


1. In what ways does your media product use, develop or challenge forms and conventions of real media products?

Conventions of a Thriller: 
  • Creates suspense 
  • Leaves the audience asking questions 
  • Disorientation
  • High level on anticipation 
  • Fast paced 
  • Building to a climax
  • Keeps the audience on the edge of their seat
By using these conventions I believe this helped us succeed in making a successful Thriller film opening we used a number of different shot types, angles, lighting and editing to create these conventions. The main camera work that we used was CU, MS and OTS by using these the audience cannot see what is going which makes them ask questions. Lighting is dark and dimmed showing the characters personality this also makes the audience weary of the character as they are unsure what they're like. When building to a climax we used quick cuts to create more tension and suspense. 







The CU draws attention to what the protagonist is doing here we see a similar scenario happening in the film Se7ven. Where the Mise En Scene and CU draws attention to what the character is doing.













The MS allows the audience to see the protagonist body language to get an understanding of what kind of character they are. In the top screen shot you can see how the character is standing up straight and head up high portraying that he is confident/cocky. Whereas the bottom one the character is looking down and more slouch this could suggest that he is
more confined in himself. 
















 the OTS creates disorientation because you cannot see the protagonist face just what they are seeing so you do not know how they are going to react. Where as in the top screen shot the OTS is used to focus on his outfit and the props he using to get a more of an understanding of what the character is. 



By using these conventions and forms me and my group have created something unique and different. We have tried to make a twist to the story line by making it look like the killer is the victim and the victims are the killers. We believe this is different because it does not fit in with the cliché thriller yet sticks to the codes and conventions.  


Picture One:
  • Restricted narration is used to hide his identity
  • Non diagetic sound use creates tension when he is opening the letter 
  • The focus on the letter creates tension and makes it more intense. 
  • Low key lighting making Duncan look more suspicious to the audience as the antagonist.
  • Dark clothing to represent his personality being mysterious and dark.  
Picture Two:
  • The frame is just about right so that unnecessary space is not shown
  • Lighting creates a shadow which adds effect adds the effect making the shot look more dramatic and adds to his personality by making him look like the antagonist 
  •  Props make audience ask questions 
  • Non diagetic used to add to the tension and create more climax
  • Slow pace to create suspense leading to climax
Picture Three: 
  • Props; the book says 'violence' represents Duncans personality and what he is planning to do. Clock shows time passing and leading to what he's planning to do
  • restricted narration focuses on the book and what he is writing
  • Lighting highlights the props that are used focusing the audience attention around them more
Picture Four:
  • Camera is handheld making it more realistic and that this personal towards Duncan
  • The setting is urban as each scene cuts through walking through underpaths, streets and fields
  • Costume, hair and makeup all add to the characters personality which fits into their strereotype
  • Soundtrack constructs the mood0
  • Harsh dialogue makes it more intense on the audience
Picture Five:
  • Lighting creating a shadow adds to effect
  • Picture black outside creates more tension as people connotate the dark to be when something dangerous is going to happen
  • Restricted narrative hiding his identity creating more suspense 
  • Camera gives us a POV of what Duncan sees 
Picture Six: 
  • Framing focuses on the map and everything that he's planning
  • Continuity of restricted narrative to hide his identity
  • Low lighting creating more tension 
  • Sound adding to the climax slowly getting louder and louder as the camera tracks around him building suspense 
Picture Seven: 
  • Restricted narrative to hide his identity 
  • Lighting uses warm colour to represent to the audience that his room is where it creates suspense and tension.  
  • Diagetic sound and sound effects used to make it more realistic
  • No soundtrack to make the sound effects more intense 
Picture Eight:
  • Shallow depth of field used so the audience focus on the mug
  • Mug is used to change setting
  • Focus fades back to show Duncan walking out of the room this creates tension for the audience as they do no know what is happening
  • Low lighting again is used this represents his personality and this room is a dark place and evil
Picture Nine:
  • MCU used to focus on Duncan when he is planning an important bit 
  • Evidence board is a good prop adds to realism 
  • Soundtrack hits climax and is just about to zoom out to show Duncan project

2.How does your media product represent particular social groups?


For the teenagers the social class that we wanted to represent them in a social class E this is because the audience will automatically stereotype them as being a threat. There is a mixture of males and females so that we could represent both sex. We wanted the teenagers to be represented more masculine therefore they seem more intimidating and strong and dominate. Their age is around 16-17 this is because this age of teenagers are always stereotype and in the public eye are the main cause for problems. Their ethnicity is a mix of white British and black British this gives us a mixture of ethnicities which will be easier to stereotype so the audience have a greater understanding about these characters. We kept all the characters heterosexual to keep them more masculine and aggressive.

For Duncan we wanted to represent him in social class D this is because he works for what he's got but he didn't have a high paying job this is shown because he lives in a council house. We wanted to represent him masculine because of the twist it shows that he is independent and strong and can handle himself. His age will be late 40's because we didn't want him to be too old so that the audience felt sorry for him so much that when he goes on to kill them later they do not feel bad towards the teenagers, we didn't want the audience to empathises with him. 



  • For the teenagers we wanted to use the camera as it looked like a camera phone. The idea come from the screen shot above from the film 'Harry Brown' 
we wanted to represent their social class and age by doing this.

  • Their costume and hair represent their class and what area they come from. There is only one cut during the teenage scene this shows that it on a simple phone which they are recording representing what class they are in. 
  • The sound for the teenagers is dialogue the way the speak represents them in a lower class as they use slang with terms such as "blud" "mans" "dat" and "doe". 
  • We stereotyped them as 'chavs' we choose this because chavs are represented in a negative way as they are always causing trouble, loud and aggressive. This is achieved by being cliché with the way they dress and the way they speak and also the way they act this is all represented in the screen shots above.  






  • For the main character we wanted the camera work to not always be on his face to make him more mysterious and insecure.  


  • From our inspiration being from 'Harry Brown' we wanted to recreate that image but a younger more modern version. Here you can see that he is casually dressed but not being portrayed as the stereotypical 'chav' we wanted to represent him in a higher class than the teenagers. 
  • The main character has more edits such a cut's. The cuts are at a quicker pace to create more tension and build the climax. 
  • There is no dialogue therefore it represents how traumatised he is that he's lost his voice, his identity. 
At first we wanted to represent the main character positively this is represented by making him look like the victim when he is the complete opposite. Not till the end of the clip he is scene to be the antagonist.
  • We represented the teenagers the way we did to represent them as the antagonist. We wanted the audience to think that they will be able to predict what was going to happen which will throw them off with the twist at the end. 


  • Our characters with help to target the audience because some people are able to relate to them. Some of our audience will fit into the stereotype and will understand and be able to connect with the characters. Because when they connect with the character. 



3. What kind of media institution might distribute your media product and why? 










  • Metrodome is a fully integrated rights management and distribution business which provides content across all distribution platforms in the UK.
  • Metrodome works with some of the biggest names in the business including : 
  • Demi Moore
  • Colin Firth
  • Michael Caine
  • Jet Li








4. Who would be the audience for your media product?



  • Our audience will be both aimed at males and females. 
  • It will be more masculine so it will be for an audience who do not mind violence.
  • Age will vary from 18-45 because those are around our characters age which will be easy for them to understand more.




Best movie I’ve seen in a long time—and equal comments from my seventeen year old son and 45 yr. old brother who were with me—in fact I know that my wife and daughter would love this movie also (they’re planning on seeing it today). - Lisa, 42, UK








“The Dark Knight Rises” was an excellent finish to a good trilogy. Christopher Nolan did a great job with all three movies. “The Dark Knight Rises” has a deep, compelling plot that will make you think and demand your attention. The script is so beautifully written, the acting is magnificent, and the action was impressive. The movie is pretty violent. Nothing bloody or gory, but it is violent. Bane is a merciless, cruel villain. He shows no mercy to any of his victims.- Margaret Ivory, 25, UK






This has to be the most well made movie I have seen in a long time. Brad Pitt and Morgan Freeman put on great performances as detectives. The language was the part that was the most offensive to me (75 f words). The violence was gruesome, but they had to tell the story in some way. I wouldn’t recommend this to the squeamish or little children.- Joel, 18, UK










5. How did you attract/address your audience?


Story line

  • We thought about the storyline in detail and know exactly what we want. 
  • It keeps the audience asking question with what Duncan is doing 
  • The twist throws the audience off so they do not predict what going to




Camerawork

  • Different types of shots mainly over the shoulder we didn't want to give away too much of Duncan identify and felt that this was for the best way to do it.
  • There are some shots filmed hand held this makes it more of a direct address because they look like they are talking to the audience 
  • Some shots appear in CCTV creates voyeurism for the audience making them feel as if they are spying on the teenagers.

Mise en scene

  • The lighting gets darker as the teenagers get closer to Duncan's house we purposely chose this because we wanted to show time changing through each clip. 
  • By sticking the the stereotypical look it makes the audience understand why they look like the antagonist. 

Setting


The setting shows that Duncan lives in a place where a middle age man would live. But also fits in with the costumes for the 'chavvy' teenagers because it is a council house. This portrays a more realistic effect because you can understand why the teenagers are around that area.




Use Of Character 




  • The teenagers were the right age because if they were any younger they wouldn't be a threat and if they were older it wouldn't be as effective when they got killed.
  • Duncan was also the right age because if he was younger he wouldn't be a prime age for the teenagers to target and if he was too old it would be harder for him to carry out the killings.

Sound


  • The sound effect such as turning on kettle and the mug hitting the surface this add more of an effect because the sounds are so intense.
  • The teenagers use dialogue they are the only characters to use it this shows they are loud and outspoken which fits their stereotype.





6. What have you learnt about technologies from the process of constructing this product?













7. Looking back at your preliminary task, what do you feel you have learned in the progression from it to the full product?






Use of camera
  • I feel as if my camerawork has improved 
  • Using different shot types than my preliminary more CU, MS all examples of this are shown in the screen grabs above
  • Learnt how to frame a shot properly not leaving unnecessary open space.
Sound Editing
  • I have learnt how to use garage band
  • I have also learnt on final cut pro how to adjust the volume at certain points to create suspense and an atmosphere
Vision editing
  • Learnt how to use a filter this is shown in the first 15 seconds with the clips including the teenagers we had to make the camera look as if it was being recorded from a camera phone. 
  • Learnt how to fade shots in and out
  • How to use transitions
  • I also learnt how to put text over the top of the clip
Construction of character 
  • I definitely have improved with my construction of character. Because before I didn't realise how important it was to think about the characters and how that attracts the audience. Now I think about every detail and how that will attract my audience. 


Friday, 19 April 2013

Evaluation - Lucy O'Reilly


In what ways does your media product use, develop or challenge forms and conventions of real media products?














Evaluation - Abbie Serafin

1.) In what ways does your media product use, develop or challenge forms and conventions of real media products? 

The conventions of a thriller are:
- Leaving audience in suspense by using music
- Mystery by using shadowing 
- Titling on a black background
- Non-diegetic music played on top
- Framing shots using close ups









The lighting has been developed from the chiaroscuro in Double Indemnity, we adapted it by making it more vibrant as it's a modernised thriller. 
















Over the shoulder shot with the character in shadow creates a mysterious atmosphere and isolates the other character. This is a very common shot in thrillers, my example is from Batman. 










 Using appropriate costumes and props to create an image of a modern teenage stereotypical gang.















2.) How does your media product represent particular social groups? 


- Uses adaptations of the stereotypical image of a group of teenagers, known for their rowdy behaviour and trouble making.
 - Both male and female characters are used, with them being from working class families - this was shown by both their costume and the language they were using.
- This also added a more negative representation of them.
- We wanted to represent them like this because we wanted Duncan Barnes to look more like the victim and to focus any suspicion on the group of teenagers.


- The main character, Duncan Barnes was portrayed as a middle aged man from a more middle-class background.
- He was casually dressed but still seemed quite well presented.
- We represented him in this way due to the fact we wanted him to look like your normal middle-aged man and not cause any suspicion of him at first, we wanted this to be later revealed mainly by the use of props.

3.) What kind of media institution might distribute you media product and why?









4.) Who would be the audience for your media product?
-  Target audience for our thriller would be 18-35 year olds
-  Consists very strong language throughout
- Compared it to what certificate the film Harry Brown was given as it was a big influence on our thriller.

  




5.) How did you attract/address your audience? 
- Included violence
- Included strong language
- Used actors of a similar age
- Included a gang
- Used stereotypical clothing associated with gangs and the 'chav' image.
- Used modern slang words that people out of the age catagory would struggle to understand






















6.) What have you learnt about technologies from the process of constructing this product? 


 - We used a HD Sony camera with a HDD.
 - We learnt that before filming making sure the white balance was at a correct setting as to avoid bad saturation.
 - We also learnt how to attach a camera to a tripod in order to produce a more stable image and pan.
- We had a slight problem when recording as the camera battery ran out halfway through recording but we managed to re-record things the next day when the battery had been charged. 


- We added a CCTV filter to make a more realistic image as well as a green coloured filter to mimic CCTV footage
- By increasing the pace it gives the impression that the character is stressed
- The lighting in the opening titles is chiaroscuro which gives a sense of mystery and tension
- A camera snap effect was used to intensify the realism of the film
- I personally struggled with some of the use of Final Cut Pro but I managed to ask both members of my group and the technicians to help me. 


7.) Looking back at your preliminary task, what do you feel you have learned in the progression from it to the full product? 
 
 







- Improved camera skills to do more complex shots such as the over the shoulder shot 
- Improved lighting skills adding more detail to the images with shadowing 
- Higher focus on characters clothing, precisely picking what each person wore to fit their character type
- Improvement in editing knowledge by learning how to use specific filters to give a specific effect 
- Clearer focus on story giving better insight as to what is going on 
- More advanced titling method as had to link it to thriller theme 
- Improvement using match on action by making more precise cuts when editing 
- Took more time in finding a suitable location as in the preliminary we were given the location
- We had to re-record over sound as we realised it didn't pick up well during the filming process